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why such burden?

crested to my breast
what painfully ills me
is the moment I had forgotten who I was...

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  • RenaissanceGirl
    January 21

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    For only being able to use 17 words, this was very well done...you've captured something highly significant and didn't need to burden your words with unnecessary detail. Short & to the point, good job.


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    January 20
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    i really like this. well chosen words. now seventeen perfect. thanks for entering.
    Laura


  • Kari gold member
    January 20

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    This is so very sad. I think we've all experienced that at one point in our lives and we have to do something to get back on track and find ourselves again.


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    January 20
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    16 words, youre one short.