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The colour of love

After the rose coloured glasses,
the hearts and the flowers
midnight walks and kisses in the moonlight

After cream satin sheets
and clumsy giggles
little black dress in a heap on the floor

After pink lipstick
and a spray of channel
flirtatious glances and cheeky love notes

I ask you now
what colour is love.

Please tell me what you think

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 25

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    Not sure of the color of love, but as many times as your heart beats with dedication to your partner for life, endless loyalty from both sides will never be out-done. Red is a beautiful symbal.


  • JustWhoIAm
    January 21

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    I like this a lot, it shows the reality of love, it's not all roses and candlelight, it cools off over time.

    The way it is written is brilliant with the short verses and question at the end