Mamma take a look at your boy
We were sent to this world
Broken inside destined to lose, I just sit down and watch tv
Hey, I wanna crawl out on my skin
I did it all just for her, I did it all just for her
Born of blood, mysterious, fire and steel their loves,
I feel like I’m drowing, trying to catch my breath
We were sent to this world
You know I’ve been mistaken
Proud and so glorious,
Fallen, broken, simply dissolved into an incomplete thought
I’m staring out a broken door
I feel the wind in my hair, and it's whispering, telling me things,
It waits for the day, I will let it out
The times are changing so fast
In the black of the night she appears
I want a cup that overflows with love
I stand alone in the darkness
No rest from the demon within
Today is just an other day
Author notes
ok this is really weird but we'll see
Mamma take a look at your boy (Mercenary Man by Firewind)
We were sent to this world (Tyranny by Firewind)
Broken inside .. tv (Violator by Ra)
Hey I wanna crawl out on my skin (Counting Stars by Sugarcult)
I did it all just for her (Poison Girl by HIM)
Born of blood, mysterious, fire and steel their loves (Warrior by Firewind)
I feel like I’m drowning (Abyss of your eyes by Stratovarius)
We were sent to this world (Tyranny by Firewind)
You know I’ve been mistaken (You Keep Right Here Waiting by Staind)
Fallen, broken.. thought (Fallen Angels by Ra)
I’m starting out a broken door (Through the Monsoon by (I can’t rem.))
I feel the wind …. things, (Hunting High and Low by Stratovarius)
It waits for the day, I will let it out (It’s the Fear by Within Temptation)
The times are changing so fast (Destiny by Stratovarius)
in the black of the night she appears (Until Kingdom Come by Kamelot)
I want a cup that overflows with love (I Want Love by Melissa Williamson)
I stand alone in the darkness (Forever by Stratovarius)
No rest from the demon within (Between Heaven and Hell by Firewind)
Today is just an other day (Speed of Light by Stratovarius)
(Title:The 28th Day from Wolf Moon by Type O Negative)
sorry about that.. guess i was really sleepy lol
thanks.. hope it's ok to edit
A contest entry
- A Little Bit o Fun by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
550 points, ended January 23, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice collection you have there, made an interesting read, and even made sorta sense in places...lol. Thanks for entering and good luck
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AM thinking you really like Tyranny
This is an interesting collection yet when the lines come together funny how they can work....images flash in and out of thoughts as the next line is read ...has been a pleasure to read these poem ..enjoyed the fun of the contest challenge.. Good luck and thank you.
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This came out quite interesting, especially the repetative lines
We were sent to this world
that worked well. However the title of this should bot be called Wolf Moon but, "The 28th day" as you were supposed to use the first line of the 21st song for your title.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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