I need a guardian angel,
To help me through my days,
To warn me of right and wrong,
And guide me in my ways,
I want a guardian angel,
To watch me as I cry,
To help me see my wings,
And let me know how and why,
I am a guardian angel,
I’m failing at what I do,
I’m only trying to help myself,
And it’s only hurting you,
We’re all guardian angels,
Murder, Suicide, Hate,
We’re all failing completely,
In destiny, freewill, and, fate
A contest entry
- transcendentalism by unraveled.
400 points, ended January 28, 13 entries
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Comments
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I found this to be a bit cliche and juvenile. I think you could have done better with leaving out the excess punctuation and some fresh ideas- or expand on the ones you have with fresh image.
Thank you for the entry,
-cassidy
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