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Cry

Lying there
broken
and he's looking
down at me

rage in his voice
and enough sorrow for three

he screams
to the heavens
one prayerful cry

it echoes and bounces
drops back from the sky
he falls to his knees
catches it inside

I can't let you go
I can't let you leave


and I smile
as he cries
and I kiss him goodbye

just let me fly
my love
just let me fly


he closes his eyes
but does not agree

one final touch
one final sigh

just let me fly
my love
just let me fly

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