All I need is the sky
To bring the rain
And rain fire on it
Burst it all into flames
Burn it away
Yeah I based my life on it
Free everything that I know
Just let it all go
Without even trying to fight it. . .
My dreams lay dormant by the fire
As the flames roll higher
And you blow away the ashes of me yeah.
[Bridge]
And I fall.... fall again to the ground
I release..... but nothing wants to come out
I walk around like a machine
Head hung low hiding all of my pain
[Chorus]
Carry on
The sun rises after it sets
And lights the way to the shore
The time has come to bury myself in the sea
Wash away all thats left of me
Let the pieces scatter around
And the salt help my decay
As I slowly erode and settle under the oceans floor
I'll try to stop the fire from raining on me
I'll hide under the water so deep
I'll make sure I never come up to breathe
I'll never come up to breathe
[VERSE:]
Very unfinished but these are some lyrics I am messing with for now.
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well i enjoyed it1 doesn't seems unfinished!
it's real beauty, I love the imagery,everything was great but these were best:
"Free everything that I know
Just let it all go
Without even trying to fight it. . .
My dreams lay dormant by the fire
As the flames roll higher
And you blow away the ashes of me yeah"
keep it up lol! enjoyed it
Good Luck
Ani
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Even if they're very unfinished, they are very nicely written! Thanks for sharing.
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Great Talent
I love the words spoken but also the way it roles together in an unique pattern rarely used in poetry!! Amazing Technique! I loved it
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I absoutely loved it
this is great keep on writing -
NICE!!!
This is a awesome lyric! So far so good keep up the tempo! xoxo Miranda
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These are some good lyrics here and I know it will be great once you put music to them. Great work here hon
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Awesome so far! I cannot wait until they are finished so i can read the final product! Rock is my fave type of music, too. Awesome shiz there, man!
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wow i really like this piece to love it
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I really like this. Your great with the lyrics. I'm the writer for my rock back so yeah I can feel your lyrics. Great job.
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nice
this is such a great one dear!! i luvvvv it!!
"And i fall....fall again to the ground"
my favorite line by far!!
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Like awesome.
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I thought this was interesting
I liked it but it is a bit dicey in some spots it would be a great edgy song but I liked where your going with it the words where great. Kepp on writing Ari
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So far so good. I like where these lyrics could go. Can't wait to see what you end up with!
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Wow....I think the idea of this is cool, and also to wording and the way your describing it..
but, if there going to be lyrics, I would play around with them some more!
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i like it so far hunii
you need to msg me
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