The last time she ran
naked in the streets
the full moon came...
A contest entry
- 13 words. by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended January 20, 32 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Ahh
And 13 marvelous words describe the vision...hmmm
Coincidence...? I think not... sweet to the eye indeed.
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Ahhh ____
Multi layered erratic erotica
luved the symplicity
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Brilliant.
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First off, because I'll forget if I don't say it, congrats on the silver. You deserved it.
This was beautiful and funny at the same time. It reminds me of a few of my friends, so that made it a lot more fun to read.
Awesome job and congrats again. This was brilliant.
♣ Tegan
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hey!congratulations.you won.
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howl
and i thought apollo 17 was the last mission to get the moon's rocks off. naked women in the streets ... sheer lunacy. thanks for the 13 words. -moonyfish
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The last time I ran
naked in the streets
the police came....
There's so much imagery in this small poem it conjures up wonderful scenarios.
Peace Georgia
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LOL, very well done.
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Was he wearing a old black flasher coat, standing in the shadows...? Wry wit within theses droplets! hehehe!!!
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And I bet the sky lit up with shooting stars too. She must've been striking for the moon to take notice!
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This is great! Thanks for the smile!
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really nice
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