This night I lost control
My dreams have gotten away
I used to have them chained up
I used to have them locked away
Now they have taken
What reality once held
The wolves are alive and speaking
They know your heart's desire
The wind is whispering your secrets
To everyone who lends their ear
Rain is more death than life
When you walk along a log
Sudden things
Mean everything
In this world
Inside my mind
It's everything
That I dream
Author notes
I think this fits. i kinda said that the dreams had taken over reality... so it has a background to stand on
A contest entry
- Imagine dreams are reality & Reality are dreams! by Lanasaur.
550 points, ended February 8, 17 entries
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Like!!!Totally awesome!
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Beautiful
i love this poem it really inspires me best of luck in the contest -
Surreal.
I felt like I was reading song lyrics, but when the erse was over, I was surprised ot to see a refrain, another vere, and a bridge, followed by yet another refrain similar in rhythm but different in words than the last. Apart from that, this was very well written. The images were gripping and understandably scattered about the piece lke leaves in Autumn. Nicely written.
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good one.
that was one of the best poems i've read all week. i am going to check out your profile and stuff and see if i should add you to my faves
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