Clytemnestra
Has time tarnished you?
Made your tongue sharper?
Were you shrewd or merely a shrew
It's a matter of consonants
And consistency
Did the death of a daughter
Drive you to see
The need for foul play
A plan
And a little infidelity?
Were you a bitch
Or more?
A mortal Fury:
Fighting fire with brimstone
Please tell me what you think
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Short and yet gave even the reader unfamiliar with the subject the abilty to read and enjoy this peice as it is entire in its self. Easy to see the motive here, and her feelings emote through the write. I love the way you let the words "A plan " just stand on its own without explaination or expounding on it. I also like the way you did not explain what action she took but explored the possible thought process behind how she came to do whatever she did. I enjoyed this one very much!
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i like these ones that are addressed to Greeks. the alliteration rolling around in this write is... delightful.
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