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Menodow

What hate!
What pale hollow glows!
Haunting hallowed halls
Lurking in the deep

Whispering to white eyed rats
"Gone"
Scratching on the walls
"Gone"
Screaming to earth's molten heart
"Gone"

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  • Riftkin gold member
    January 21

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    This was something very different.
    I liked where you went with it.

    Best of luck to you with this.