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The Gateway

THE GATEWAY

Intensities thought, brought closer to light.
Things of the unknown, but believed worthy the fight
Our dreams of tomorrow, may be of today
Memories not made yet, and the wish that they stayed
For what we imagine, can be made to be true
If we follow our hearts, it can lead me to you
Through a magical gateway, to a parallel side
I shall keep my eyes open,  my fate I decide

My past is certain, a path misconstrued
But the future is bright, I'll be given whats due
For all my wrongs, I've attempted to make right
and wish on countless stars that blanket the night
On the wings of a Robin, I shall float to the sky
and live on my own terms, till the day that I die

I live in the now, fear nothing, I'm free
For all my youthful battles, are far behind me
I was given this life to do as I please
Make the most of each moment,  to ride on a breeze
For all that I am, there is more I will be
But where I am now, makes me glad I am me 

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    January 31
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    Written like a true passionate poet.

    Loved this,
    All the best,
    MJ.


  • breedluv gold member
    January 20

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    Ah, Jenn, a wonderful write. Your rhyme and rhythm are spot on, and your sentiments are very well expressed. Congratulation on a very well-written poem!


  • Fedrizzi
    January 20

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    simple, yet lovely, this actually gave me a bit of motivation in my own life, living on a breeze sounds wonderful right about now haha.

    Thank you for a wonderful entry!