I see my self as a person who tries but never succeeds
I see my self trying to grow a forest without any seeds.
Once twice even three times but always failed
It’s like my brain know the word success can’t be spelled
People that know me might think I’m a bit successful
But to the ones in my heart I feel a total failure.
I ask a question and I get yelled and insulted
It’s like the title of failure is mine and its undisputed.
I shall do what she wants and become what she wishes
But forgive me mother to me that is no happiness so might as well make me do dishes.
For them I can’t do nothing right I just can explain it
But when ever I try to do something for them I feel intimidated
I love them and respect them but fear is taking over
I’m stuck and can’t get out like my life was over.
I feel happy when I’m with my friends my pain is ejected
But when I’m with family forgive me god but I feel rejected.
A contest entry
- Written Souls by Fedrizzi.
1800 points, ended February 10, 57 entries
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Wow, Totaly amazin' Poem ... kindda deep and I guess family issues can truely, most of the times, tough to deal with ...
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I can connect very well with this poem, especially since i have similar feelings about my family, if you need to talk about it, message me and I'll offer you what advice i can.
The poem itself was well worded, and flowed well. A true part of you came from this and thats exactly what I'm looking for, Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest
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