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Battles

September got lost in a battle of wills
summer's pressures still tough in my mind
I will, I won't, I shouldn't, I want to

October almost held strong
but pressure kept building, building
and in the end the front was lost

November and December got lost in the shuffle
meaningless days blending together
each the same battle, lost

January, the battles turned
not in result but in mind
still submitting, but the resistance has formed

February will be better
A promise has been made
and I will not give in again

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  • endless-lover silver member
    April 20
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    niely done :]
    i wish you all the best and eep up the work

    vanna


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 23

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    You are beautiful just the way you are. No need to change.

    But hey, if you ever need to talk to someone, I'm here