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fixing a broken girl

take time with a broken girl
make her feel secure

take care of ones who endured
who has endured

look her in the eyes
let her see your verity

let the girl feel your sincerity
show your sincerity

don't leave her in the dark
take her in the light

be her hero, her knight
show your a white knight

let the broken girl be fixed
all she needs it to heal

show her something real
show her how to feel

Author notes

don't all girls wish for a man to come and take care of them, even i do.
it would be nice to be saved for myself hate.

could you fix me?

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  • The Cube
    January 20
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    I think they all do at some point but tehre are few that don't.