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Decaying mind

Missing image
Yet still within the dream ...
so strange the thoughts,
I nearly screamed.

eyes that look out beyond
from this decaying mind.

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  • lovingpoet
    March 28, 2009
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    now that I got some points thaought you would love some and good luck

  • lovingpoet
    March 27, 2009
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    very well done thank you for entering the contest


    • guardianhost gold member
      March 27, 2009
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      Thank you for reading and commenting

      Times when I try to understand the workings of my mind ...the triggers that spur me off in so many directions.


  • individuality gold member
    March 27, 2009

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    a good poem, ah the mind, forever decaying as time traps us, its beady eyes watching every move we make, and then it pounces.

    • guardianhost gold member
      March 27, 2009
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      gruesome truth

      thank you for reading and commenting - it means alot to me

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