After my heart
Under the spell of heart
Glimmer, glare and shimmer of heart
Heavier feelings that come from the heart
Together with love from the heart
Eraser for the heart
Ruler of heart
Laughter
Laughter
After my heart
Under the spell of heart
Glimmer, glare and shimmer of heart
Heavier feelings that come from the heart
Together with love from the heart
Eraser for the heart
Ruler of heart
Laughter
After my heart
Under the spell of heart
Glimmer, glare and shimmer of heart
Heavier feelings that come from the heart
Together with love from the heart
Eraser for the heart
Ruler of heart
Laughter
Author notes
Acrostic Rictameter with front end rhyme and end line epiphora
In rhetoric, an anaphora (Greek: ἀναφορά, "carrying back") is emphasizing words by repeating them at the beginnings of neighboring clauses. In contrast, an epistrophe (or epiphora) is repeating words at the clauses' ends.
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How the heck does someone ever write one of these with some many different factors in it. Well done on the brilliance you are.
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A beautiful and vaneltine edged poem,
I love the repitition and smooth flow, as it creats warm imagery.
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Laughter is a wonderful thing, it can be a healer and a sharer of joy! This is cool!
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This is well written and I understand the repetition but I can't say honestly that I care for it. What I do like a lot though is the fact that laughter is the ruler and eraser for the heart. Clever that! Thank you for entering.
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Thanks for reading, I removed it.
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Wow~
Now this is one Unique piece and form that I have not seen before
Powerful message also this Inspired me to want and give this a go
Excellent once again~
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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wow...bravo! bravo! bravo! this is another challenge that you've written beautifully...and what's the good thing about it...is that you've shared your knowledge to us...God bless always!
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:)
It is the best.
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You show off!!!!
You amaze me time and again!
Peace and love
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aww this is so truly lovely sis!!!! They say that laughter is the best medicine!!!! You did a truly wonderful job with this piece!!!! I love it!!!!
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Very intelligent write. I'm impressed with the acrostic and epiphora two things I could not do well. Laughter is a wonderful topic. It is also something I need to have more. It would be good for my heart.
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Very clever write.
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Sis, it seems petty of me to say this, but, it's so good that you should present it without the highlights, and with as little flourish as possible, even without the explanation; because this is a poem that stands or falls on its words. I love the injection of humour with "eraser" and "ruler". Very, very good indeed.
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Thank you so much Sis. I took your advice regarding the color change and by doing so it gave me an idea for a different type of formatting for a Rictameter. I decided to leave my notes because I am here on AP to learn and I believe others are too.
I love your comments so much because you seem to catch exactly what I try to inflict in my work. I was hoping someone would pick up on the subtle humor.
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Schweet!
All the best hon,
MJ.
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I like the way your mind works
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interesting and very neat way of doing a rictameter. Iv'e done haiku's this way lol Good Luck in the contest Dear
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Sis,
I don't think I have ever seen a rictameter set up this way, but you are the Form Queen, and this is why! This is amazing, and your subject is fantastic! Laughter can do soooooo much for one's heart. It is the medicine that we all need sometimes!
Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Enjoyed this.
Love the anaphora.
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Now THAT is a Rictameter!!!
Wonderfully complex, a great subject beautifully tackled.
Superbly written and causing much laughter here!
Jeff
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