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pain, sorrow, tears

tears of passion
tears of pain
but never shall they
be seen again


what happens when you cant cry anymore
when the tears are gone
when the pain shows
when the smiles fade
& the sorrow grows


where will you be
while i stand here alone?
while i cry
wishing i could curl up & die



why is it when things become to much
we just cant raise the gun to our head
no matter how much you wish to be dead

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  • catz Moderators member
    June 14, 2009

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    Why?  Could it be that it's because we've come through such trying times, heartache, sadness, and survived! What holds us back from doing something so drastic? Could it be that within ourselves we see the hope and love that's within each of us, begging to come forth?

    Good questions, Mollie, and I feel that you're struggling for answers, maybe you've found some answers already. Keep looking, keep reminding yourself of all the blessings you have and all the people who love you and want what's good for you and yours... like me

    love and
    Auntie Dee, Mystic Soul


  • morningstar1948 gold member
    January 20, 2009

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    The pain of tears will stop

    The pains and the hurt and the tender words of comfort . the tears will dry up and the hurt will be gone. as you find in your on comfort of your heart. you learn the lessons we all go thru. sometime it take awilie sometime it doesn't. but never give up
    it may be around the corner. watching and knowing how bad they hurt you. I was sick since sunday night. Went to doctor today. the weather had me down. now I got my pills refilled. I will be fine.. I look for you. Hope you are okay. I look for your sister angel also. She hasnt been on. and it scare me. I pray you and her are okay.
    I love You honey
    Momma