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Forest Song

The horizion comes to me
Adventures unfolding
Eyes I see
Bright as lightening
Down under the tree
Watching the leaves fall you say
The forest is alive
Echoing music on the breeze
Dancing with the living lights
My heart overflows here
Freedom ringing

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  • laura0757 silver member
    September 5
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    a simple but beautiful poem, keep up the great writing.


  • duana
    June 10

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    now that is poetry- it sings and rings just like poetry is supposed to bringing all the content alive, as if we are in the middle of the scene. VERY well written.


  • dark search
    January 20
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    damn...can anyone tell me how to edit the back ground ti does not match...