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I Wonder



Transcendence was once a natural discovery
for every individual born into natural creation.
discovery was internal,
life was meditation.

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  • unraveled
    January 28

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    Simple, but I really enjoyed what you have to say here. "discovery was internal, life was meditation." *Sigh*... so true. I wish people could learn to return to themselves. We get so caught up in the unimportant details of our lives.

    My only criticism is the length- I think your muse has a lot more to offer on this subject
    Thank you for the entry,
    -cassidy