I have many a burden weighing upon my heart
And although this pain gives me life,
Ironically it is tearing me apart
My mind is impenetrable,
Yet it is filled with strife
Along with memories of the most beautiful face I ever did see.
And although my body is resilient
Simple notions of you bring me to my knees,
It appears as if there is nothing left to say
And what little hope I held seems to be withering away.. and expiring
And although my heart is audacious and my soul is bold,
Both of which, are indubitably crying.
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nice
its a nice poem but it have no flow in it. the main idea is good. but i think the poet is confused and he can not express his feelings. he can't express it in the form of words. Any how good work poet, keep it up.
Ali
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