I loved you at first glance, my darling dear,
as the scent of your perfume lingers on
I fall into your faithful arms sincere,
where pillow talks propel me to be strong.
You're the angel of my dreams I've longed for,
my treasure chest I lay my burdens in
Poetic pages of you I adore,
where your words of light cure my soul of sin.
Rose petals comfort breaths I breathe deeply,
you're my every fantasy come true
Soft kisses from cherry lips of beauty,
shows me how I'll never stop loving you.
Like a breeze by the still rivers of touch,
my sweet quintessence, I cherish you much.
Adding your comment:
hehe its good though, this is a wonderfully penned sonnet, yoru like teh mster of sonnets 
hehe Love you bro, you did great,
this is amazing in so many ways. I truly felt touched by this piece, the calmness and dedication of affection reaped here. Truly I feel honored to have read such a wonderul piece of your heart my Poetic brother.
