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Hello

Hello

It's business now as usual.
Continued cash for Israel.
I'm glad that I am here to speak.
I'll start a war or two next week.
There's no relief for working poor.
I'll give the corporations more.
Did you really expect change?
People you are so deranged.
I'm here behind my tempered glass
So people you can kiss my ass.
Hello!

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  • PinkPony
    January 25
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    HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Oh, so smart and wildly funny! Cool!


  • Errant Panther gold member
    January 22

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    a rather cynical view of what one man can do if all under his charge are willing to implement the changes he perceives necessary, no doubt you are not alone in expressing these sentiments and your opinion is most certainly to be respected.


    • LarryATilander
      January 22
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      I believe the man will start out trying

      and that self interests, prejudices, greed, lies and corruption will guide those who are expected to impliment the changes he deems proper until cynicism hardens him into a copy of those who came before. That is, unless he is percieved as the same kind of threat to the status quo that JFK was.


  • toomysterious
    January 20
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    It is true no man can change things alone and it is not an easy task, but our cynicism should always be tempered with hope. It will take a whole nation working together to really bring about change. But oh, the possibilities. This is a fine humorous, satirical poem. Perhaps, it will not be prophetic.

  • LarryATilander
    January 20
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    I think the machine is too big

    for change of the magnitude people expect. He'll end up doing what one set of puppet masters or another tells him to do. Most of all he'll maintain the status quo.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 20

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    Humorous slant on our expectations of a president...We often expect too much....But here you portray as us as being decieved and disappointed..He is not the Messiah....But is a change....clever write!

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