My smile is a sonata of dreams
sealed by a spill of words
waiting to be constructed: so rhythmically, so beautifully
like waves' orchestra of enchantment
flowing on life's melody:
of fierce mimims in its quickness,
in photocopiers' dialogues, or clicking heels
rushing between laptops and streets
or in Perdeno's bittersweet interplays -
the paradoxic caffeinated moments;
Mordenos of passing aways within time's labyrinth
in a transitional tune
or in heightened Crescendo
in life's chocolat au lait of all things sweet -
sealed in my savored smile of sonatas
Author notes
This piece just comes to me after I heard the soundtrack of the Asian movie "Turn left, turn right."
Perhaps it is also influenced by interplay of sound in poetry in one of my courses, or my dance/flute background (I need to get my flute back from HK ASAP though so I can hopefully complete the Grade 8 diploma!), and with the craziness of work/news - I thought I may as well try a project on fusing words into musical tunes. Any suggestions?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW
The sheer energy, the intense synergy, the abstract philosophy and your seducing lexical choice are all in full form and BLOWING ME AWAY. I sincerely adore your form, your structure and your language (why can't we study works like yours in Literature!) so moving this piece made my legs jelly and my stomach all jumpy.
Truly, you have the makings of an epic poet and SHOULD be published if you are not already. I've only ever felt pure poetry of this sort in the works of Plath, Duffy, STC (samuel taylor colridge) and Nichols. In all honesty, this poem has made my day
Love and Peace to you
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