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World of Ice Part 2 (Broken)

Eclipsing the stairs
Around corners; everywhere
Waiting for a baited hook
To willingly lose singularity
A sanctity never-ending

A dying saint
Leading sheep to slaughter
This is how it must be
The cycle never ceases

Upon the bed with a broken spring
We lay waiting for redemption
As our bodies become one

As the blinding light develops
Every moment's truth

There is nothing to see

Our faces interchangeable
Props on the burned out stage

This must be our future
A tragedy of diversion
Leading way to the finale

But this is reality
We are not divinity
Only frozen sculptures
No higher purpose leads us

You crash down the stairs
Your thoughts and heart separated
Is this what you longed for
to be buried in the ground?
To leave me here alone?

Author notes

Part 2, introducing our protagonist's turning point within his life.

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