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Care [Just a Little]

I only wish
.
You'd think
For once
..
Maybe try
At all
To get it
...
Give a care
About What you say
And Do
Why can't you
....
Just try it
Maybe
Just maybe
You'll like it
I can only ask
.....
I'll try, but I know
Can't make you
Listen
One day
I'm sure
You'll find out
......

Author notes

Well, i don't really have a lot of time, just thought It'd be a nice way for me to get some steam out....let my thoughts out in my writing.

So, what ya think?

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  • whitenoise
    January 27, 2009

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    its good and letting out emotions is good, its very heartfelt
    white