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Snapshot of a Relationship #5

I saw that look
That shift of blue in my direction
Do you think this is fair?
A brush of a hand
or a word?
You think you are so clever
Let me show you
Bruises upon bruises
A splatter of black green blue yellow
from my knees
and the concrete
grinding into my skin
So think again
Every move gives us away

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I like writing tiny snapshots of things that may or may not have happened.
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  • theromantic
    January 20
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    nicely done

    this had to ahve happenned...this is very dramatic sdounds as if you were beaten, and if u were you dont deserve this type of pain in your life, no one does, stay strong, and if imrite fine your will power, and bust through these hard times, with no regrets etc...sorry ive been drining so yes i spell wrong...but no woman deserves to be hurt