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Drown

Have you ever wondered;
What would it be like to drown?

The water is such a difficult creature
Cold, cruel, unforgiving features

Hear the noise, the pure havoc
Feel the empty pit in your stomach

Above the surface is pure hell
Noise, chaos, dare not dwell

Dive, Dive so deep that you blackout
The chaos above the water is drowned out

Swim, swim to the bottom, rest
Listen and you can hear the break of the water crest

Silence, pure silence
Keep it this way, ignore the absence

The water amplifies your senses
You relax, no need to be tense

You rest along the floor
And suddenly you soar

The water is my friend
And I’ll be there at my end

Is it not all you’re searching for?

Forever free, silence, death

I often wonder what its like to drown…
And one day I’ll find out.

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  • amazing

    really nice flow...
    with the word and rhyming i immagined hearing the words being whispered in out of darkness...

    i loved every bit of it..
    you are a great writer..keep it up!!