Have you ever wondered;
What would it be like to drown?
The water is such a difficult creature
Cold, cruel, unforgiving features
Hear the noise, the pure havoc
Feel the empty pit in your stomach
Above the surface is pure hell
Noise, chaos, dare not dwell
Dive, Dive so deep that you blackout
The chaos above the water is drowned out
Swim, swim to the bottom, rest
Listen and you can hear the break of the water crest
Silence, pure silence
Keep it this way, ignore the absence
The water amplifies your senses
You relax, no need to be tense
You rest along the floor
And suddenly you soar
The water is my friend
And I’ll be there at my end
Is it not all you’re searching for?
Forever free, silence, death
I often wonder what its like to drown…
And one day I’ll find out.
Comments
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amazing
really nice flow...
with the word and rhyming i immagined hearing the words being whispered in out of darkness...
i loved every bit of it..
you are a great writer..keep it up!!


