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A World Pt.3

By Charles R Marks

Whispers in the wind
Echo's all around
A glow of light shines down
Fog appears,A shadow mergers
Dazed and confused,A little amused
Out walks a man
Skin lightly Tan
Long brown hair
With his hand
He kneels in the sand
And Spells out JESUS!
With a world so cold
Finally the man returns bringing back a whole new world
Giving mankind a another chance
Giving life to a new world as he is remember as the hero.

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