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Alone?

Alone,
It is the way I feel,
When I look into your eyes,
To love,
But not love back,

When I hear your voice,
Telling him,
You love him,
But laugh at me,

To see the sparkle in your eyes,
When you look at him,
But stay indifferent,
When you look at me,

When I see you with him,
But I walk the halls,
By myself,
Wandering,
Thinking of you......

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  • Sounds like she can't seem see the one right in front of her... if anything poetry is something like numbing the pain let it out venting is good and so is the poetry short sweet and to the point

  • Nobodysboy
    January 19
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    sounds like somebody true to their lover,, you cant blame them can u?