Alone,
It is the way I feel,
When I look into your eyes,
To love,
But not love back,
When I hear your voice,
Telling him,
You love him,
But laugh at me,
To see the sparkle in your eyes,
When you look at him,
But stay indifferent,
When you look at me,
When I see you with him,
But I walk the halls,
By myself,
Wandering,
Thinking of you......
A contest entry
- Loneliness by Cyclical.
1000 points, ended February 9, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
watcha think of this, it is a short one, but hope you like it.....
Comments
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Sounds like she can't seem see the one right in front of her... if anything poetry is something like numbing the pain let it out venting is good and so is the poetry short sweet and to the point
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sounds like somebody true to their lover,, you cant blame them can u?
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thanx
Thanx for your comment, but its because she's true that I don't.........
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