Darkness approaches
upon seductive waves,
its depths masked
with beautiful crests...
Gentle winds move me,
drawing me upon
deadly, rocky shores ~
Still,
Your light glows ~
illuminating a path
so I shall not lose my way.
Author notes
Image prompt, 35 Words
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/35/30 by Ziola.
700 points, ended January 20, 2009, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aw wow this is brillant congratulations on your shiny
maralisa
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what a lovely story here, this is beauty, this is having someone to catch you. very well done with prompt, ty for entering
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This was beautiful. The imagery and vocabulary are perfect, and it is so beautiful. The ending was very powerful as well. Good luck, though you don't need it!
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