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blue

feelings that strangle

inside,

 

red eyes can't see

through to the light.

 

 

 

but I will be fine.

 

 

 

 

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  • vieve gold member
    February 9

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    beautiful simplicity.

    the closing line tempers the mood - balances it & reminds me to keep that in mind - because it always seems to be true.


  • solarjinx
    January 23

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    you've expressed more creative emotion in 19 words than I've seen a lot of people not do in 100+

    I REALLY liked this.


  • Terry-too silver member
    January 19

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    Courage
    in the thin ends of its reaching
    strength overcomes.

    Count on it.

    Terry