When you're here with me my heart knows you're around
It smiles and it's laughter knocks us to the ground
But I'm still comfortable in your arms atop the rough grass
I pray silently our relationship will last
And when you're by my side I know we'll remain the same
By heart and choice of the great things so many people falsely claim
I know we're in love because I still get the tingles
The butterflies, the ladybugs, something you don't get when you're single
When we kiss I feel the electric currents pulling me closer in
I still feel the comfortable warmth that lingers on your skin
I know you'll always be with me because I trust you that much
I couldn't live without your pleasant kisses and soft satin touch
I couldn't feel the same without all that you've given me
There's too much of you that I haven't seen
I want to get deeper within the soul of yours
I love the feeling of your arms around me, I always feel secure
I know if you leave me we'll still be in close connection
I never have to remind myself I made a great selection
Everytime your velvet voice reminds me of my grace
I picture those lovely features God put upon your face
Thank you for loving me with everything you've got
I know if I haven't given you everything I've sure given you a lot
I know you love me more than any words could express
Thank you for always leaving me breathless
Author notes
I hit shuffle. The first thing it said was by the chipmunks....so I went with the second one 
Everytime we Touch~ Cascada
"YEAH"
Abidoodlez
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Comments
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aw!! This is really beautiful and comes straight from your heart to mine! Wonderful imagery and very expressive in nature! It leaves a tingly sensation all over me!! Well penned!! I like this background..it soothes me
~pri
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it feels good knowing you have security with a the person you love. the bond is strong. love this poem
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OMG!!
u have spoken my heart!!
and please also put ur AP name in ur AN
amazing write !!
i loved the whole poemm...if i said what my fave lines were id have to copy pastet he whole poem..but mostyly the last line !
too good !!!
good luck in the contest !
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My name is in the AN...
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ABI !!!!!!
i just entered into one of ur contests...lol......
u got an amazing poem here u know that right ??!!! 
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R u a girl or a guy? lol just wondering...
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im a gal lol...
i know my name sounds wierd...but glad=i=ator just means im GLAD !!which i am most o the time !!!
so u get me ....
u can call ma anu !! issok
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Than what's with the picture?
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this is so beautiful. true love is amazing. good luck in ur contests.
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Thank you!
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Didn't I tell you I was A hopeless romantic?
This really tugged at my heartstrings. Love,love,love."the tingles,butterflies,ladybugs?"
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haha. YES. i even have it in bold on my page! lol. I get asked that all the time =/
I really don't even like my stuff that much but apparently i write well for my age!
Thank you!
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Thank you for this so loving entry
Nicely done
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Thank you!
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This poem was really sweet. I love your backgrounds. They are so cute. Do you make them?
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Thanks! And no! I really wish I could make backgrounds!
Haha. I got most of the falling ones off photobucket!
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very very nice.
i enjoyed it; thanks for your entry! good luck!
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Amazing! Such true love. The last two lines were my favorite.
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Thanks!
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I really like it.
fav part:
And when you're by my side I know we'll remain the same
By heart and choice of the great things so many people falsely claim
I know we're in love because I still get the tingles
The butterflies, the ladybugs, something you don't get when you're single
very romatic and sweet!
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Thanks! means a lot!
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I couldn't feel the same without all that you've given me
There's too much of you that I haven't seen
I want to get deeper within the soul of yours
I love the feeling of your arms around me, I always feel secure
I thought this bit here was fantastic and... in my current situation made me a bit sad =/ now i have things to sort out! so thanks anyhow, a beautiful write here.
Welcome to the group and if you want specific poems read feel free to add them to the list or make a topic ^_^
Laura
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wow..
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Thanks!
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Nicely done! the love in the poem expressed, I can tell you put a lot of heart into it. Love the background! Thanks for entering! Love, Raneika
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Thank you! And Thanks you!
Haha, I LOVE the falling backgrounds!
( THANK YOU PHOTOBUCKET )
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Your Very Welcome! Love, Raneika
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Awhh(:
I love how you wrapped this all up in the last two lines.
Great job.
I'm not really a fan of rhyming because it always sounds forced, but this was definetly an exception.
Great write.
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*bites lip* Ooh...Well Sorry about the rhyming but thanks for the comment!
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lol- that's okay: it was great anyways.
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I hope!
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