Dressed in leather, the latest style
waiting for your tongue of pleasure
if you ask me nicely I'll open wide
for you to taste my treasures
wrap me in chains, whatever is your kink
just tongue me slower without rush
and I don't want to hear what you think
while you make me cum just hush!
my moans should be enough for you
to know if you turn me on
and if your cock is willing and true
I'll return the favor when you are done
slide you down into my mouth
make you hard and make you shiver
I am your heat though the cold is south
i know my lips will set you aquiver
but take your time to find the spot
you know is going to make me scream
and in your wildest fantasy
I'm the one who'll make you cream
Author notes
that um pic..is damn hot!
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Image/71/135.jpg
A contest entry
- . . .and one more for adults only (this one's out there) by JinSays.
900 points, ended January 27, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it make you cum?
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I would no sounds except some humming at the right time and spot.
Very well written and flows so smoothly. Good job done.
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This is certainly hot, and the imagery is nothing to sneeze at. LOL.
I think I would have loved to see this without such tight rhyme. A little spillage woulda been nice, but dont listen to me, it's hot on it's own without the prompt.
Thank you for taking the time to enter, and I wish you all the best.
Love,
jin
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This is a great piece of erotic poetry.
Love the imagery and word play within.
It screams come pleasure me.YUMMY
Thanks for sharing your erotic side.
Tony
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So what are you waiting for then? lol
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wow that was amazing. great ideas. wow, wow, wow. hot hot hot
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Well making love should be full of ideas lol
Shay
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OOOHHH!!!
GAAAAWWDD!!! Yeah wow, ok ok..you are certainly a magician with imagery my friend! damn..hot hot hot!!!!
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Thanks my old friend! As if I never did
I gather you got my message from Sara...snowed in here and just bored out of my freaking mind lol
Shay
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