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life after death

I'm waiting for her to come
my hands in my pocket
as the snow melts upon my face
I can do nothing but think

It's my life after death
and that's all that's left
tonight is all I have
for this life is a gift

being given a second chance
does not happen that often
but I'll do it for you
for your life after death

I turn around
as the wind burns my skin
and look where our heart was
where I last laid our mark

but it's gone
as time erases all marks
but the scar won't leave
you're etched in my heart

what you said
will remain until the end
for what we both deserve
is life after death

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