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What's Happening?

Your skin is cold,
Your clothes all tattered,
Why did you leave me,
Broken and alone.

You filled my heart,
With Joy and love,
Not to mention happiness.
What's happening?

Your body lay broken,
Underneath a Sacamore,
Like you were in a great battle,
But lost.

What do I do now?
How do I move on?
My life is nothing without you,
It has no meaning unless you're in it.

"Please come back to me,
I can't live without you."

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  • the rhythm here is spot on, and the magry rips my heart out, makes time stand still, its a piece of art