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it wasn't worth it

despite my hole life
regardless to every thing i've learned
it wasn't worth it
even though i spent one night away
pretending it was with you
it wasn't worth it
despite how blurry my vision was
regardless i could see
it wasn't worth it
even though i will try to rewrite this
you will erase my words thinking
it wasn't worth it
despite how much i will change
regardless i will die alone because
it wasn't worth it
even though i'm a joke in your eyes
you will be a fallen angle to me, believing 
it wasn't worth it
despite the love you never showed
regardless to how much i gave
it was all worth it
in my eyes....

Author notes

i made mistakes that i can't fix.
and in so lost the love of my life so far.

it wasn't worth it.

is it ever worth it?

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  • The Cube
    January 20

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    What makes this special is probably the fact that I know what's going on. There are no words that can be said further rather than what I have already said to you. I feel your pain.; Maybe not as immensly, but I do feel it.


  • L.Jay
    January 19
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    this has happened to me and it hurts but it does slowly fade at some point.