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Lost

I wondered where,  why

You softly took my hand

I had no hope, no clue

You gently filled my heart

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For a magic lady...

A contest entry

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  • eyesofanangel524
    January 19

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    Love and its impact. Simplistic and yet complicated. Yet its effect on ones heart and soul....well for that there is no need in explaining. Well done..and best of luck in the contest. Simply heartfelt and beautiful, serene.


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    January 19
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    I love this piece, well done


  • hisaddiction
    January 19
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    simply beautiful


  • MagicLady silver member
    January 19

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    This is very sweet. Helping to fill each others heart is a good part of life.

    Cheryl


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    January 19

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    This is sad But really well written. All the best in the contest!

    Take care


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 19

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    Lost, yet saved. Fantastic piece! I love the sense of loss, but the ending message of being filled. Bravo! Thank you for entering and good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina

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