A symphony of syllables that taste delicious
roll across the tongue,
the warming breath of comprehension
dances through imagination.
Inspiration hitting me in waves,
words fall into place
lost all thought for time and space,
as stars explode into sentences,
I understand.
Author notes
C note humming from a guitar
Sorry
A contest entry
- 4th Year Anniversay on AP - Poetry by CarolDesjarlais.
1750 points, ended January 22, 2009, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i love the opening here -
A symphony of syllables that taste delicious
roll across the tongue,
that is fantastic in my humble estimation - it sets the poem right away in the groove.
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great piece here with imagery that puts it all together...congratulations on the silver
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Hey, congrats on the silver, well deserved. excellent take on the prompt....you do marvelous things with words
wyattxxx
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Please put prompt in author's notes....
I udnerstand...indeed do I ever! words do fall into place like a flashing set of stars streaking across the sky to land, black, on parchment. -
Ah, i think i'm having an epiphany
understanding arises of itself!
you use of metaphores really conveys that which i thought could never be articulated. You seem to have captured the lightning fast transition from one state to realization.
"stars explode into sentences,
I understand."
I realy like these lines because its like a picture of wonder exploding into understanding.
Very Good write!
A pleasure to read you
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as always, beatifully WRITTEN
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