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doubts

why would I ever promise
when it's something I cant do
when I know I'm going to let you down.

I can't believe how much I care
About what you think
about how much I'd hurt you

I don't understand why you
care about me, my screwed up self
still are here when you know the truth

please god help me
I dont want to hurt him
I dont want to disappoint him
and prove my doubts right

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