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the koi and the moon
part ways
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  • poetgirl25
    January 28

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    Lovely...the words you used so perfectly convey the slow movement of each as they gently move apart...you are a master for sure!


  • Sara Bellem
    January 28

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    Thats Beautiful

    What a beautiful ku... I have missed your writes. Thank you for your condolences on my mama. She adored you as well. Ironically I read your comment today, on her 83rd birthday Love you Sara


    • haikumonk gold member
      January 28
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      Hi Sara.... long time no talk! It's amazing how time and life just flies by. I know you've had some tough times recently but i hope you're doing well in spite of it all. Big


  • Redstormy gold member
    January 25
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    I enjoyed this little breath


  • dustookie2
    January 24

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    The balance brings harmony calm thoughts transcend and I can linger in the light of moon. Thank you for the moment of pleasure.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    January 20
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    Both slowly disappearing...what a lovely imagery you show here Don


  • abuyi
    January 20
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    beautiful.. dont know what else to say


  • funpum
    January 20

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    Like this one -the idea of the carp sinking to the bottom of the poo and the moon to the bottom of the sky...


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    January 20

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    WOW! I loved this! It made me think of a ballerina dancing with someone and then parting ways. A beautifully laid out haiku. Love the contrast in L3. Wonderful imagery and a great choice of words. Keep them coming!

    Cheers!
    -Charishma


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    January 19

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    this is cute, I like the shaped form that parts the moon from the breed of little critters in ponds

    good luck
    MM


    • haikumonk gold member
      January 19
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      Thanks... I appreciate you popping in on my work. Have a blessed day.

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