When the tears dry
I've figured the solution
I pray to God
waiting
to be numb
A contest entry
- Cry Me A River by Ephiphany.
1050 points, ended February 13, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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delicately powerful short and yet packed with a deeper thought
nice
abigail
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yeah...
very strong in so few words..outstanding.
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Such Power
in this piece
Thank you so much for this entry and good luck. I really liked this alot.
-Ephiphany
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Wow, powerful words! Like the raw emotion, simplicity, yet depth of the poem. We can always call to Him in prayer and be confident He will answer us. Nice write, nice message.
~n
va
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whoa! so little words, so much emotion. I love the simplicity of the poem. a million applause.
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