where one once looked for a yellow enemy
now looks for a terrorist
hiding in an urban jungle
and one wonders
if there is danger
hiding within the wings
of the next corner.
and when will this war finally be over?
If it's left up today's news pundits
especially the right wing.
it will be never!
hopefully with the new hope
sitting in the White House
our soldiers will be coming home
as soon as possible
and tomorrow will be a better day.
Jan. 19, 2009
Please tell me what you think
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A GOOD WRITTEN POEM
hopefully with the new hope
sitting in the White House
our soldiers will be coming home
as soon as possible
and tomorrow will be a better day.
REMINDS ME MILTON
THANK YOU FOR SHARING

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Without hope we have little
nicely done There's no mistaking the meaning but its open it other meanings... I like that!

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Excellent
Aye, let us hope so. A very fine write, just as it is. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, very well done.
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I assume you approve of obama. i like how this poem i very curerent and modern
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well done
hope it will be a strong new age for America
An Ameriacn in Canada

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has me thinkin'......
great poem! and yes, this war is going on for to long. yep, peace is the way 2 go. keep it up!!!
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I am glad I clicked on this,I agree this war must end,it has gone long enough as it is,we should all be living in one dream in one world with peace,Regards,Hazel


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im a soldier, and i agree with you, this war needs to end, but if it does, were does that put the usa?
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on the path to peace
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