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Heroes Of Today

where one once looked for a yellow enemy
now looks for a terrorist
hiding in an urban jungle
and one wonders
if there is danger
hiding within the wings
of the next corner.
and when will this war  finally be over?
If it's left up today's news pundits
especially the right wing.
it will be never!
hopefully with the new hope
sitting in the White House
our soldiers will be coming home
as soon as possible
and tomorrow will be a better day.

Jan. 19, 2009

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  • elinawilfred
    January 21, 2009

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    A GOOD WRITTEN POEM

    hopefully with the new hope
    sitting in the White House
    our soldiers will be coming home
    as soon as possible
    and tomorrow will be a better day.
    REMINDS ME MILTON
    THANK YOU FOR SHARING


  • Mantha
    January 21, 2009
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    Without hope we have little

    nicely done There's no mistaking the meaning but its open it other meanings... I like that!


  • Clovis6790Curious silver member
    January 20, 2009

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    Excellent

    Aye, let us hope so. A very fine write, just as it is. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, very well done.


  • Threnoidia
    January 20, 2009
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    I assume you approve of obama. i like how this poem i very curerent and modern


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 20, 2009
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    well done

    hope it will be a strong new age for America

    An Ameriacn in Canada


  • Angelunawares
    January 20, 2009
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    has me thinkin'......

    great poem! and yes, this war is going on for to long. yep, peace is the way 2 go. keep it up!!!


  • ScottishPrincess silver member
    January 20, 2009

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    I am glad I clicked on this,I agree this war must end,it has gone long enough as it is,we should all be living in one dream in one world with peace,Regards,Hazel

  • darksky5
    January 20, 2009

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    im a soldier, and i agree with you, this war needs to end, but if it does, were does that put the usa?

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