Caught in lust
A teenage gaze
A fraction, a cut
A phrase, what whit
To win my heart
A shadow, a gasp
A glance, one touch
Our arms the tightened heart strings
Perished and pushed, to merge as one
To form my world
My love, oh come amore
Keep me safe in your grasp
For one hour more
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this is about love and how it binds two worlds and two hearts into one
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WOW
This is awesome you're very talented i've read a few others of yours...BRILLIANT!!
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The choppiness of the poem fits into it very well I think. Great work! Your mother has certainly taught you well.
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thanks
thankyou x for your kind words lol X i hope to read some of your work soon
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very nice
What a wonderful flow of words. I really loved your love poem or teen age lust poem.I love the last paragraph. Love the way this reads. the line The way you ask your love to keep you safe. Wonderful read.
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thankyou
thankyou sooo much for your kind words i find your poetry captivating im always looking for your next write xx coments coming your way
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this is great,,, your mum passed your named on to me,, and I'm so glad to read some of your additions to this wonderfulll site,,, you sound and seem to be very talented,,, MUST HAVE GOT IT FROM YOUR MUM,,,lol or she from you,,,lol,,, either way nice job here and i'm excited to read more from you LITTLE FISH
michael
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thankyuoooooooo your work is also brilliant thankyou for your kind words x
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This is lovley, and i can relate to it well, very passionate descrptions which gives this soul. xx
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thanks
thankyou very ,uch your comment is well aprieciated
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