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Focus

Focus, focus.
It's all in your head.
You can do this!
All it takes is effort.
I tell myself lies.

Pain, pain.
No where to run.
No where to hide.
An ultimatum doesn't care.
So I sit down.
Fingers poise over keyboard.
Words will come.
Words will flow.
If only the world's problem's would go.

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writing a history paper on Human Rights Violations....

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  • swimmeroks
    January 19

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    this was...ok.
    This may seem harsh, but If you're gonna rhyme, then rhyme. If you're not, then don't. Don't do a little combination of both.
    Sorry!!! It's a major pet-peeve of mine.


    • greatperhaps
      January 19
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      yaaa that was a bit harsh... the only stuff that rhymed was the last two lines... and that was accidental! DON'T SHOOT!!!!!!!


      • swimmeroks
        January 19
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        I'm sorry!!! I think that sounded a bit harsher than I meant it...It's just a pet peeve of mine.