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Whats There To Live For?

Everyday i think more and more,
whats the point in living?
whats there to live for?

For some peoples its their friends,
for others its their families,
For others it can be their kids,
for few its for their jobs,
but for me there is nothing,
i have nothing to live for.

AND WHY???
I've lost my family and my friends,
all because i wanted my life to end,
so now i try to think maybe they do care,
the thing is no ones ever really there,
they all think its my fault im like this,
but its not i didnt ask to live but not exist!

Well now ive decided if they think its me,
ill prove them right and cease to be.
I would prefer it like that than living this way,
having to lie to everyone more everyday.
Maybe they will like that after all,
I KNOW I WILL......................
cause i know now there is nothing left to live for.

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  • November-Dani
    March 1, 2009

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    Awwww you poor thing. Its ok, you know. Everything allwayse gets better. no matter how long it may take. This is very heartfelt and deep.
    Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you.
    Dani.


  • vamp-angel
    January 21, 2009
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    you are a great poet dont let any one destroy you.
    this poem is so sad.


  • Ez Writer silver member
    January 21, 2009

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    All your friends they care for you , that's not the thing for you to do . I know it's rough but you are tough an soon i know - you will make it through !!
    Hugs ! Friend Easy

  • starving-to-survive
    January 19, 2009

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO babe, please, stop, please, no. Omg i have let you down so bad. You cant kill your self.....i am your friend, i care about you, i need you, i care about you, please, no i am so so so so so so so so sorry, i have failed you.
    I dont know what to do.
    I am always here for you, i wish that i could take your pain away. What have i done, how could i have messed up as your friend so bad. I am evil, i am so sorry. I am the one that needs to die not you.
    So many people care about you, just as i do. Please stop, no dont do anything. i am so sorry. i wuve you hunny,
    Remember i love you 1
    I love you 2
    I love you 3
    I love you 4
    And i sure as hell, love you more.
    Always and for ever hun, please rememebr that.
    I am so sorry. :'( xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • Zannah
    January 19, 2009
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    were all here. everyone thats read this poem. dont go.


  • Mad4life
    January 19, 2009

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    YOu are an amazing poet and an amazing person. Your poetry speaks to me and many other people so dont just give up on life because its not right. If you need someone I am here and I care.


  • peregrin
    January 19, 2009
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    I am here, you haven't lost me! And you help me so much...
    *hugs*


  • Winter Wolf gold member
    January 19, 2009

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    No don't do this their is something to live for you just don't see it yet. Your friends care about you. I CARE ABOUT YOU! please don't do anything rash I love you. your a wonderful person and friend. this is very sad it makes me sad..

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