Gleaming suit of silver sheets
Reveals vanity's vile visage
A sword draws a dragon's defeat
With a shine, and suspend's passion's pilage
Who knows bravery's form?
The real flesh and blood that brew
Where is a suspect's dorm?
For him, glamoured knights must sue
But stern words cannot hide a face
A villian's head not so large to, either
A prism is the door to truth's case
That ruins and reveals all tethers
The spectrum of many names
The suspicions of reflection(')s right
One and more than the same
All in one non-colored light
Author notes
Let's see if there is anyone who can tell me why this poem is bad, because no one else seems to get it! Pretty words does not always equal greatness! Anyways, comment and tell me what you think, but I'm more so looking for suggestions.
Please tell me what you think
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i really like this. great use of poetic devices, especially alliteration in the first stanza, it really emphasises that part of the poem. strong imagery throuhout, i also love the use of questions in the second stanza. thank you, i truly enjoyed reading this! - ElectricBloom
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