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My Breaking Heart

From the very start
you tore out my heart
I should have known
you were a clone

Of the other men
I say amen
for time will tell
when you go to hell

I loved you dear
you didn't get that clear
now I must suffer
you with no supper

Tears did fall
now you crawl
at my feet you can lay
its time for you to pay

Never knock at my door
I hide on the cold floor
heart beating with broken love
the hurt thereof

Go away today tomorrow
leave me in my sorrow
I must mend for new love
this time sent from above

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  • AbidoodleCullen
    January 19

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    I like the lines "Go away today tomorrow
    leave me in my sorrow" the most!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    <3 abi