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Good night

 I can not sleep

is so hurtfull,

as I ask me questions,

that no one can answer.

 

It just life

since i feel living

in nightmares,

but this is the truth.

 

Have to be brave,

and chage the things

that I can,

But I will still be me.

 

Good night!

my sweet mischeveous boy,

see you at the light some day.

 

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