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Prey

Altitudes stretch to better the sky;
skull pierces atmosphere

crowded room,
smiling face -
  progression encouraged
by others of similar species.

Smiles can't stay on faces forever:

as soon as I begin to strip,
Isolation's ruthless talons
creep underneath my
helpless skin.

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Prompt: Naked Bones

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  • Meroza
    January 24, 2009
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    Dark!