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Quiet Sounds

Like a light drizzle
After the battle
Everything's
Turned into a quiet sound
For once I can listen
I'm not trying
To block it out
I've got time
And space to breathe
These poems and drawings
Are only reflections
Of a garden I've tried
So hard to harbour
At first,
With the screaming
Nothing grew quite right
But now,
With only the quiet sounds
I find they
Bloom and leaf out
A little bit more proudly
Than they used to

Thank God for
Quiet sounds

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  • TheStupidLamb
    January 19, 2009
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    beautiful.


  • A n u k e t
    January 19, 2009
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    my favorite tim eis when im laying in bed in the Spring time and I leave my window open and i wake up.

    i can hear the crickets and cicadas outside my windown on the trees and in the grass and it makes me feel at peace. like everything will be okay. i think thats why I love spring the best.